Music Prompt: Sully Erna - My Light
Characters: Sirius Mephisto

Warning! This might be a bit offensive to religious people but it's not too bad, I think.

I got some ideas from superhero comics.

Most of this story is symbolic by the way, hopefully it's easy to figure out. I sure do hope the symbols are strong in this.

The ending... I was having a hard time trying to describe the emotion, it came out a lot shorter than I would like. Also Mephisto cries for the first time, I thought it was a great way to end it. I also went the cheap way out and added the lyrics of the song to make it seem longer, and maybe make it more emotional?

There was other things I wanted to write into this but I couldn't really... write it. I was going to have as Sirius having a vision of his "birth" I was going to have more of that but kept it short so it didn't end up confusing. Even though I know my mistakes I will request a critique anyway.

Also what do you think of my lit tag? I finally figured it out.

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